 
            day 59 Luigis mansion
© 2020 Jordankinsley
               working on my character design
          
        
                        
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      Very cool! It's a bit off to see that the environment has shading but Luigi has no shading. Maybe adding shadows to him and the physical parts of the Boo can enhance the drawing. Or making Boo give off a slight glow would be cool.
    
    
    
    
      





 
           
           
           
           
           
          
Again, I feel a little bit of the floatiness in your Luigi, in terms of the whole construction. Why don't you please restart it with 20 more minutes of 30 second Luigi poses? And why???? Because it's very important to lay out the gesture before you solidify it with some volumetric construction.
Hope it's been completely and totally suitable. Thanks in advance.