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Besides Line-of-Action, are there any other places that I can get critique and advice for my work?

Personally, I find any noise pretty distracting. I tend to think more clearly.

• JO NI edited this post on October 5, 2024 7:15pm.

Thanks for all the insights, it has been very eye opening.

Thanks for the insight, I'll look into the person you mentioned.

Did some watercolors figures and all critiques are welcomed. Should I add another color to make the figures more interesting? Also, any recommendation on books or resources about watercolor and gouache? I just realized I don't have books or references that focuses on watercolor and gouache.

https://imgur.com/a/c3I9BQ9

• JO NI edited this post on June 9, 2024 6:05pm.

Can I make stylistic choices when rendering? For example, I used ink and watercolor to capture the shapes of light and shadow. Also, am I obligated to make realistic rendering or is it a choice? All other crituqes are welcomed.

https://imgur.com/a/WwYLOKS

• JO NI edited this post on May 29, 2024 11:18pm.

My first time using Proko's Robo Beans. It was akward at first, yet the torso and plevis looks more interesting. Any suggestions to improve this, especially foreshorten figures?

https://imgur.com/a/HwdfSnc

• JO NI edited this post on May 26, 2024 3:28am.
• JO NI edited this post on May 26, 2024 3:29am.
• JO NI edited this post on May 26, 2024 3:29am.

Thanks for the suggestions. I do prefer critiques that are direct and on point, all of your suggestions had been very insightful.

Also, what type of paper that is ideal for graphite? I'm using a sketchbook that said that it can be used for pencils and ink. But what qualities that I should look for when shopping for paper?

• JO NI edited this post on May 17, 2024 4:05am.
• JO NI edited this post on May 17, 2024 4:14am.

Some 5 to 10 minutes drawings, forget to showed them. One of my 10 minute drawing I was focusing on the upper body. I did noticed that blocking the shadows (with the help of squintikng my eyes) does make the process more simplified. Any suggestions?

https://imgur.com/Q9DlH41

https://imgur.com/2qC5eg1

https://imgur.com/NpFIKhs

Going through Proko's course, using the bean method is interesting. I noticed that my quick gestures do look more "alive". I will be continuing his course, especially his Rbobeans.

https://imgur.com/a/0pR4Ajx

• JO NI edited this post on May 14, 2024 10:18pm.

This was very informative, thank you for time to exlpain my shortcomings. I do watch Proko's content but to have a structure class that focuses on foundation figures is immensely helpful.

Critique on rendering and anatomy. The books suggest had been useful. Any suggestions for more challenging activities to improve shortcomings, especially foreshortening?

Edit: Fixing some techincal issues. For some reason, the link does not show all of my images in a single post. Not sure if anyone saw all of my drawings.

https://imgur.com/rQDCBzT

https://imgur.com/m6yEsLf

• JO NI edited this post on May 11, 2024 5:06am.
• JO NI edited this post on May 11, 2024 5:06am.
• JO NI edited this post on May 11, 2024 5:07am.
• JO NI edited this post on May 12, 2024 7:13pm.

See if this works, this is my first time using Imgur. Sorry of the inconvience. I really appricated the technical help.

https://imgur.com/a/GrAyrAX

I see, I'll fix it as soon as possible.

• JO NI edited this post on May 7, 2024 2:47am.
• JO NI edited this post on May 7, 2024 2:53am.
• JO NI edited this post on May 7, 2024 2:54am.
• JO NI edited this post on May 7, 2024 3:24am.

Alriht, let me relinked. If that dosen't work, I'll used imgur. It did worked twice before, not sure what happend.

https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1787247202295042479

https://twitter.com/JO_NI12

• JO NI edited this post on May 6, 2024 5:04pm.
• JO NI edited this post on May 6, 2024 5:05pm.