Forum posts by JO NI

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  • #31748

    Thanks for the insight, I'll look into the person you mentioned.

    #31746

    Did some watercolors figures and all critiques are welcomed. Should I add another color to make the figures more interesting? Also, any recommendation on books or resources about watercolor and gouache? I just realized I don't have books or references that focuses on watercolor and gouache.

    https://imgur.com/a/c3I9BQ9

    • JO NI edited this post on June 9, 2024 6:05pm.
    #31685

    Can I make stylistic choices when rendering? For example, I used ink and watercolor to capture the shapes of light and shadow. Also, am I obligated to make realistic rendering or is it a choice? All other crituqes are welcomed.

    https://imgur.com/a/WwYLOKS

    • JO NI edited this post on May 29, 2024 11:18pm.
    #31666

    My first time using Proko's Robo Beans. It was akward at first, yet the torso and plevis looks more interesting. Any suggestions to improve this, especially foreshorten figures?

    https://imgur.com/a/HwdfSnc

    • JO NI edited this post on May 26, 2024 3:28am.
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    • JO NI edited this post on May 26, 2024 3:29am.
    #31603

    Thanks for the suggestions. I do prefer critiques that are direct and on point, all of your suggestions had been very insightful.

    Also, what type of paper that is ideal for graphite? I'm using a sketchbook that said that it can be used for pencils and ink. But what qualities that I should look for when shopping for paper?

    • JO NI edited this post on May 17, 2024 4:05am.
    • JO NI edited this post on May 17, 2024 4:14am.
    #31599

    Some 5 to 10 minutes drawings, forget to showed them. One of my 10 minute drawing I was focusing on the upper body. I did noticed that blocking the shadows (with the help of squintikng my eyes) does make the process more simplified. Any suggestions?

    https://imgur.com/Q9DlH41

    https://imgur.com/2qC5eg1

    https://imgur.com/NpFIKhs

    #31592

    Going through Proko's course, using the bean method is interesting. I noticed that my quick gestures do look more "alive". I will be continuing his course, especially his Rbobeans.

    https://imgur.com/a/0pR4Ajx

    • JO NI edited this post on May 14, 2024 10:18pm.
    #31579

    This was very informative, thank you for time to exlpain my shortcomings. I do watch Proko's content but to have a structure class that focuses on foundation figures is immensely helpful.

    #31572

    Critique on rendering and anatomy. The books suggest had been useful. Any suggestions for more challenging activities to improve shortcomings, especially foreshortening?

    Edit: Fixing some techincal issues. For some reason, the link does not show all of my images in a single post. Not sure if anyone saw all of my drawings.

    https://imgur.com/rQDCBzT

    https://imgur.com/m6yEsLf

    • JO NI edited this post on May 11, 2024 5:06am.
    • JO NI edited this post on May 11, 2024 5:06am.
    • JO NI edited this post on May 11, 2024 5:07am.
    • JO NI edited this post on May 12, 2024 7:13pm.
    #31543

    See if this works, this is my first time using Imgur. Sorry of the inconvience. I really appricated the technical help.

    https://imgur.com/a/GrAyrAX

    #31540

    I see, I'll fix it as soon as possible.

    • JO NI edited this post on May 7, 2024 2:47am.
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    • JO NI edited this post on May 7, 2024 2:54am.
    • JO NI edited this post on May 7, 2024 3:24am.
    #31532

    Alriht, let me relinked. If that dosen't work, I'll used imgur. It did worked twice before, not sure what happend.

    https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1787247202295042479

    https://twitter.com/JO_NI12

    • JO NI edited this post on May 6, 2024 5:04pm.
    • JO NI edited this post on May 6, 2024 5:05pm.
    #31530

    Working on Clairfying/Story Telling. I added expressions to see if the gesture captures performance. Also, I want to improve my rendering. Any tips and sugesstions? Resources? 10 minutes drawings really helped, should I study longer?

    https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1787247202295042479

    #31522

    Thanks for the critique. As for the texts you mentioned, I have already have purchased the books and they have been a wealth of examples and tips. I will do more 10+ minutes of drawings.

    #31515

    I want to work on clarifying/Expressing my gestures. Any suggstions and examples? Also how are my lines, shapes, and forms? What else can I improve on such as story telling?

    https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1786284861751443831

    • JO NI edited this post on May 3, 2024 6:50am.
    • JO NI edited this post on May 3, 2024 6:55am.
    • JO NI edited this post on May 3, 2024 6:18pm.