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Other then the torso being weird, I'm pretty happy with. This.
Jordankinsley
the pose would look more dynamic/interesting if the arms were not parallel, and with this amount of shading your character still looks very flat, i suggest trying to shade everyside an amount of value to give your character more form, and then add highlights.
my first critique, and your art is a bit better than mine but if i was in your position these are things i think id try to take my art to the next level.
my first critique, and your art is a bit better than mine but if i was in your position these are things i think id try to take my art to the next level.
Fusciart
I would reccomend looking at some anatomy books. Loomis, Hogarth. The problem with the torso is there isn't a centerline going down it. If you draw a torso centerline verically and then draw the chest line horizontally around the form, you would be more successful in acheiving a the correct position of the breasts.
The right arm is too close and same size as the left arm resulting in a flat look. I would make the right arm smaller and down a little, so there is an illusion of distance. The left leg is going too far past the buttocks which make it look detatched.
One thing I would reccomend is take a photo of yourself , or a friend, in this position and draw from that.
If your serious about improving I would reccomend reading "Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain".
Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain
If I could go back and tell my younger self how to get better I couldn't stress this book more. If you read it cover to cover, doing all the excercises as laid out, you come out a more prolific and conifident artist on the other end. It took me a couple months. I swear by this book.
Hope this helps.
The right arm is too close and same size as the left arm resulting in a flat look. I would make the right arm smaller and down a little, so there is an illusion of distance. The left leg is going too far past the buttocks which make it look detatched.
One thing I would reccomend is take a photo of yourself , or a friend, in this position and draw from that.
If your serious about improving I would reccomend reading "Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain".
Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain
If I could go back and tell my younger self how to get better I couldn't stress this book more. If you read it cover to cover, doing all the excercises as laid out, you come out a more prolific and conifident artist on the other end. It took me a couple months. I swear by this book.
Hope this helps.
Tx Williep