I don't think there's enough structure to the eye/eyebrow area.
Also this may be personal preference, but the overall image is in a mid range of contrast, Something to keep in mind is that the dark parts of (any drawing but especially portraits) is always darker then you'd think.
Don't be afraid to go really dark in areas and highlight others.
Good work!
Also this may be personal preference, but the overall image is in a mid range of contrast, Something to keep in mind is that the dark parts of (any drawing but especially portraits) is always darker then you'd think.
Don't be afraid to go really dark in areas and highlight others.
Good work!