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I can see a lot of Proko first lesson on gesture on this one, and I can see what the body is doing, these are pretty solid! Try getting the quality of the line to be one or two sophisticated strokes, doing the "ghosting" of the line of the paper, before applying pressure.

I don't really have any criticism (I'm new to Line-of-Action) but I would like to let you know that I love the fluidity of your lines.