Septiembre-18 (Cuerpo 3H)
© 2018 JCamiloDone as part of a 3 hour class.
My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form
Polyvios Animations
Greater and greater work on your distillation of your spaces, edges, and perceptions of proportions and angles. They are completely, positively, and totally spot-on. Please keep up the more greater works.
However, I think that the lines of action and looser lines of rhythm still needs more work than ever before. Would you like to try out our interactive drawing tutorial here on our website, clicking on the Draw page?
The reason is because if your next goal is to make your drawings lesser than stiffer but more than fluider, then we suggest you try it. For more than enough details, look into 2 Kindles of the Walt Stanchfield books on animation gesture drawing, or online for free HERE?
My hat's off to you.
Pilot
Fortunately, your proportions aren't that far off. Improve by just drawing legs or just drawing arms so you can concentrate on how long/short each segment should be.
JCamilo
Thank you so much for the critique, I'll start to work on the legs and arms proportions.