60 Second Figure Drawing

by Git16, September 10th 2018 © 2018 Git16

60-second figure drawing for critique.

Line

I like your proportions and you seem to have some knowledge of anatomy from what I can see. What I really think you could improve is how you use the line/lineweight. It's like parts of the body get lost in your scribbles, maybe you could try keeping the poses apart just for clarity? :) I usually work super light and when it comes to overlapping edges I add pressure to emphasize just that. Another thing is at some points you don't draw through: like the woman lying on the ground on the far right, it's hard seeing what lines connect where and which one overlaps which. Other than that - I like! :-)

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Git16

Thanks for the critique! I will make sure to improve on my line pressure.

Polyvios Animations

Hello, Git16, and welcome back to Line of Action.

I think you've drawn the greatest works on your lines of action and rhythm, for these lines all scream boldness and confidence; but, I feel that these lines still need the most expression and exaggeration in your next warmups. Would you like to kindly loosen up your lines and edges with 10 more minutes of 30 second pose warmups?

As a result, you can, shall, and will care the least about the insignificant forms and details, yet about the most about how the poses move and act. For most info, please be sure to pick up a copy of the Mike Mattessi Drawing Forces of the Figures and Animals book. This book has tons of handiest-dandiest but concrete info on the truest merits of gesture drawing in art, cartooning, and animation.

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