Gesture - digital 5

Its really good!! You captured the pose very nicely, watch out for the legs since they are getting a little bit thiner as they go down

I think what you should concentrate on is seein the body as a 3d object. deconstructing the bodyparts into simplified forms, like cubes and cilindersis a great way to do this. I would also recommend watching Proko's figure drawing fundamentals on YouTube and doing the assingments. Apart from that, with a lot of practice, your line quality will also improve, so that they won't be all messy. Keep up practicing, and you'll get even better!