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1/2/2022
© 2022 DuaniacBench mark for this year's progress.
Polyvios Animations
Good evening, Duaniac, I'm really admiring and adoring your spheres you've shaded and lit, cause they were spot-on!
My suggestion is that though your balls are well lit, but I'm not getting much to critique for you. But the lower sphere at the bottom edge of the page, is not getting a reflective shadow of the middle large sphere. Would you kindly be able to add that just a little bit? The reason being is that, so that we would be able to perceive the distance of the spheres believably. For more details on the drawing fundamentals of the simple forms, check out this video. (if you haven't already, really)
Hope this has been insightful and informative.
Hello,
i love this drawing, you can see where the light comes from, very good shading. the only thing that i can say about this drawing is that you could smudge the background a bit. Very good drawing, a lot is happening