2022.3.31
© 2022 Payson
Done as part of a practice session with poses of 1 minute 29 seconds in length.
My current goal is: Improve my rendering of faces
Payson
2022.3.31
Alesha Unknownartist
this looks great !
Polyvios Animations
Good morning, payson, welcome back. How are you? Great job on your range of expressions and motion of the lines of the faces. Very disciplined job on your facial forces over forms. Keep going.
However, I'm still not getting enough of your exaggerations of forces. Why don't you work your arm more with 1 hour, 1 minute of 30 second face sketches, please? If you'd love to make your forms the least stiffest and the most organic, cartoonier and spontaneous in your range of facial expressions to tell the story. If you totally need to improve your understanding of facial drawing fundamentals, then I suggest you'd look into this one, and this one, and this. Hope these have positively helped. Good morning and have a greater day.
However, I'm still not getting enough of your exaggerations of forces. Why don't you work your arm more with 1 hour, 1 minute of 30 second face sketches, please? If you'd love to make your forms the least stiffest and the most organic, cartoonier and spontaneous in your range of facial expressions to tell the story. If you totally need to improve your understanding of facial drawing fundamentals, then I suggest you'd look into this one, and this one, and this. Hope these have positively helped. Good morning and have a greater day.
Rafola Da Cartola
Hi! Nice to meet u! I'm new at this platform but I'm willing to help other ppl to improve their art too :D
I think you're going well, I like their expressions and different angles! One of the things I think u can improve is the format of the head, as you know there are many different types of heads ! ones are kinda round, others are more like geometric formats, the heads you drew there look kinda unrealistic (unless you want a more cartoon like style!!) You can improve ur art by making square shapes for the head, just choose the angle first, then draw a box (don't forget that a square have front, back, top and side view) then you draw a circle in the middle of the box, then the lines to guide u, and try to draw a head, they're not flat but they're not too round, we have curves on our face
Search some references of different types of head to help you, and good luck <3 (sorry for my ugly english lol)
You're going so well, never give up and always practice :D
I think you're going well, I like their expressions and different angles! One of the things I think u can improve is the format of the head, as you know there are many different types of heads ! ones are kinda round, others are more like geometric formats, the heads you drew there look kinda unrealistic (unless you want a more cartoon like style!!) You can improve ur art by making square shapes for the head, just choose the angle first, then draw a box (don't forget that a square have front, back, top and side view) then you draw a circle in the middle of the box, then the lines to guide u, and try to draw a head, they're not flat but they're not too round, we have curves on our face
Search some references of different types of head to help you, and good luck <3 (sorry for my ugly english lol)
You're going so well, never give up and always practice :D
