Nicer job on your sketches, more looser than ever, but I'm still seeing some of the rigidity of the looseness of the flow. How would you love to do 3 more hours of 26 second quick sketches? (About 415 doodles.) So that your lines will become even more direct and simpler. For more details, look into a PDF copy of Ben Caldwell drawing books. My hat's off to you.
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