Most fantastic job on your forceful of pose drawings, but these lines all seem too choppiest yet. How would you like to please be the most stingiest with your line quantities with 12 more minutes of 30 second force drawings?
As a result, your visual memory will and can be the least cluttered but the most sharpest, clearest, but direct. For most details, kindly look into this link rrrrrright here.
This oldest link is from John K. Stuff, but it's from a documentation of his private tutorship with himself and a student.
Good luck to you,