Good morning, Carrie May, and welcome back to Line of Action.
Great work on your forces of your face and expression. Please push your looseness of lines of action. Also, please take my comment with a real grain of salt.
I appreciate your thoughts on my work so far. I haven't done much work for many years and am finding it difficult to work from my phone. You are giving me inspiration to try harder and am going to take on your critics. Thanks
You did a wonderful job of capturing the expression! SOme of the details you worked on get kind of lost in the marks though. I think you'd get a lot out of pushing your tones a little further so that your more precise details stick out more. Lovely piece!