Tried to stick with the advice and just concentrate on lines instead of shadow
Good evening, Naima. Great job on retaining the guts of your idea from rough to tie-down. Did you study the figure, or did you just draw that figure from memory, but after you studied that pose without drawing it? Either way, great for you. But, this pose doesn't seem too gutsy to me still yet. How would you like to loosen up your non dominant hand with 72 minutes of 16 second figure poses?
The logical reason behind this constructive feedback is because, your hands and eyes and brains will be swiftly drawn less rigid, yet more dynamic, energetic, but lively. And if you wanna have another tip, kindly try drawing underhandedly.
My hat's off to you!
I draw it from memory, I'll give it a try witn underhand drawing & non dominant hands, thanks for your feedback.
Polyvios, you're just wonderful, saved my day!
Your line work is solid at most some lines darker than others but it's a sketch anyways so it doesn't matter, your anatomy is really good too at most just the left bicep is a little larger than should be but overall an amazing sketch I'm jealous