Wowzers

I definetly love the colors but ur porportions are off on the arms as the left arm is smaller than the other as well as the right eye being bigger than the other the legs are off as the left one

Hello again, Alex O.

Again, greater job on your demon girl character design. I love the line confidence on your pose and expression, but I wish I could say the same thing about her hands, as their shapes and lines are farther less clearer to me, in terms of their lines of action and rhythm, yet. Would you like to please go with 5 minutes of hands warmups?

The reason why is because, your understanding of hands can and will improve consistently if you need to, as gesture drawings go. So, for more details and tips, please pick up a copy of Force Life Drawing for the basics of gesture drawing in general and specifically, the hands.

Good luck to you.

Cool manga design. I don't know who Verusika Mayday is, but I like how the eyes are so exaggerated oversized, that they even break through the hairline.