Critique on Gestures

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June 20, 2025 3:01pm #38017

JO NI

All critique is welcomed

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June 23, 2025 2:11am #38020

Grubby

Your work is very fluid and dynamic. Especially the first 3 pages, the poses are very readable. The last two more finished poses I find to be less believable, and the perspective feels a little wonky. I think it would be beneficial to focus on creating more solid forms with perspective, because your gestures are so good.

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June 24, 2025 1:43pm #38023
JO NI

Thanks for the feedback! I agree that I need to focus on perspective and solid forms. Is there any resources or books that you recommend?
Also, if you don't mind, can you be more detailed on what makes my perspective wonky?
- JO NI edited this post on June 24, 2025 12:00pm. Reason: Adding more details

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