Looking for feedback on how to improve

[url=file:///Users/amandapanda/Downloads/LINE%20OF%20ACTION_1.pdf]30,60 & 120 second practise[/url]

The link should go to the pdf however if it doesn't please let me know as it is my first time posting on line of action :D

Hello, Ch1p Studies, and welcome to Line of Action. I'm Polyvios, and how are you doing today?



Sorry, I can't seem to click on the PDF link, because it doesn't work. Why don't you please try posting them onto your Imgur account, and thanks.

Whoops thanks