Please critique my figure drawings

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  • #26096

    Hey, can you please ciritique my figure drawings? (also some questions about the forum, do all figure drawings count here or just ones made using lineofaction and if I want to get critique again do I update this post or make a new one?)

    Here they are, Figure drawings

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    #26098

    These look great! I like how you're using the line of action to make your gestures more expressive.

    Is there a particular goal you're aiming for? How long did you give yourself to do each pose?

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    #26099

    @Acharbonnet Thank you! Right now I am trying to make my poses a bit more dynamic and try to get proportions right!

    #26100

    Thanks for your very first new post, daresom, yet let me say that both life drawings, and any and every drawing done with a line of action all count altogether. My question is plainly this: What will you be working on for the morning, noon, or evening???

    Cheers, and have a healthiest day.

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    #26101

    #26100 Thank you! In the morning I usually continue my projects and do some studying for art and animation, after that I mostly do whatever I want or study more lol.

    #26102

    You are using modified stick figures which aid in depicting their action, which is good. Us a couple of figures at a time and add flesh and bones to the figures. If drawing hands & feet are a problem, work on drawing them. Once you have one set done to your satisfaction, do two more & then keep it going. Where ever you feel weak, work on that area. Remember: Practice makes better. After a while, you will be surprised at your progress.

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    #26103

    Alright thank you!

    #26108

    (also some questions about the forum, do all figure drawings count here or just ones made using lineofaction and if I want to get critique again do I update this post or make a new one?)

    You're welcome to post any art you've made that you'd like to receive help with! :) It doesn't have to be just Line of Action images you referenced.

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    #26115

    You catched the dynamic! Looks good, I would suggest to use more loose strokes and try to avoid straight lines, Vilppu drawing book has awesome examples and specially teach you how to get that 3d look.

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    #26124

    incredible work, the shape and character is formed very nicely with this. the final three's arms are a little long and bulky so they look more masculine so good job if that's what you were going for. not much I can critique.

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