Ksari46的論壇貼

That's a great drawing, and I particularily like how you shaded the abdomin. I think you should take a look at the clavical. The shading makes it appear like it's floating too high above their connection points. Possibly consider not so deep a shadow behind the bone. I included some drawings from Michel Lauricella book Morpho: Anatomy for Artists suggested here on LOA. It could help you visualize how the light hits that part of the body. I really think you did a great job on this peice. Hopefully, the link below works. Keep it up, you're doing well.

Drawing Practice

Hi,

I want to caveat my review to let you know that it's the first one I have ever done. I am pretty new to drawing but thought I would learn this part of it too. I think your proportions are good; none of your figures appear odd. I also like that you have made some good action out of a few of your poses. It's hard to get figures down in such a short amount of time, I struggle with it, but do you believe you could add more details to the hands and feet?

I hope that assists some,

Kevin