Hello Stuartowendev,
Great start! As I can see, basic observation skills are already present. Characters have correct general proportions.
If you are a beginner, the first feedback I would give is to enjoy it the most. Have fun. That's the only real key to progress.
In my opinion from the drawing I saw, you spend a lot of time on the same line. Trying to perfect a shape, spending more time on it, is burning energy. Keep energy to make a new shapes next to it. It will create a comparison that will accelerate your improvement.
Of course if the time is short you won't have this leasure (in the beginning) but on longer poses you may give it a try.
Also if the shape of a particular line bothers you (wrist for example), and you want to have it clean (without too many strokes), you can also try to take it real slow. Drawing milimeter by milimeter keeping the pencil on the paper and watching the model each time the pencil stops, to correct the stroke.
Most of all. Keep enjoying it!
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