Rosa M. Franke的論壇貼

@HornetOfJustice

I know what I am talking about and trying it out right now. I got Koh-I-Noor Clutch pencils (5.6mm thickness) therefore. I also played around with a whittled pencil, but it doesn't give me quite the confident feeling I'd like to have.

Thanks for the advice! I didn't put that much work into that so far. I will work on it!

@Birdie

Thank you :)

Thank you for your reply. I am trying to get rather flowy lines, but somehow I do not like this kinda style. I love sharp edges and stuff. Though I know what you mean and am working on it! :D

Hi there!

Have been working on hands and feet already, and wanted to get a better grip on how these wiggly things work ;')

Didn't wanna go too much into detail (no shading etc.)

https://www.instagram.com/p/BtCJI6DBjSr/

Hi Cyrilpdev!

I really like your drawings and I could never draw in the same way. Critique end.

Just kidding, I skimmed through the tutorial, so let's get to the real critique. ;') (What I said before is still right though)

You got a great flow in your lines and I think you do well at getting grip on how the human body works. I get the impression your style works better for women or you practised female anatomy a little more. Anyways: I'd take a look at male anatomy here and try focus on how angular and blocky the male body is. Especially around the hips and arms, your figures seem a little clumpy. A good way to practice drawing arms is to imagine them as a chain.

For the muscles and stuff, I'd take a look at the masters (Michelangelo, Bernini, Raphael, etc.) and how they practised. Imo you are at a point, at which you could dive right into getting a few more details into your work!

You do a great job on simplifying the human body and on keeping your lines clear and not too scribbly! Though, I'd accentuate muscles and details a little more.

That's about it. You're doing great! Keep on that amazing work bud!