9 feb, short sketch

by Saburton33, February 11th 2019 © 2019 Saburton33

i think this was a 50 second sketch, a shortcritique would be appreciated thank you!

Slick Rick

Hi Suburton33,

Looks great, a couple of confusing elements; I'm not sure what way the head is pointing? You could try using an eye line and a center line on the face.

-Slick

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Ms Talkin

Your lines have a lot of energy, and a lyrical quality. You could make this effect stronger by composing your figure completely within the picture plane, and using line weight variation to differentiate between the figure and the drapery.

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Saburton33

Thank you for the encouragement and advice, very helpful!

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