9 feb, short sketch

by Saburton33, February 11th 2019 © 2019 Saburton33

i think this was a 50 second sketch, a shortcritique would be appreciated thank you!

Slick Rick

Hi Suburton33,

Looks great, a couple of confusing elements; I'm not sure what way the head is pointing? You could try using an eye line and a center line on the face.

-Slick

Ms Talkin

Your lines have a lot of energy, and a lyrical quality. You could make this effect stronger by composing your figure completely within the picture plane, and using line weight variation to differentiate between the figure and the drapery.

Saburton33

Thank you for the encouragement and advice, very helpful!

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