Defensive pose
© 2024 Robertncook
Done as the 10-minute final in a 30 minute class.
My current goal is: Reduce stiffness and make my drawings feel more dynamic, energetic, fluid.
First time posting. Please be gentle.
Polyvios Animations
Hello and good evening, Robertncook. Nicest work on fluidity and rhythm in your figure drawing. Please keep on working hardest. Thank you and good night.
KLFJ
你好，首先我觉得你的表现真是太棒了，尤其是上半身人物形体的扭曲动态可以被清楚地感受到。尤其是肩膀，人物为了完成动作必然要对身体的平衡（重心）进行调整，而肩膀的扭转就是这一目的。当然，下半身的处理上还需要多加练习，没有很好的匹配上肢的扭曲，所以感觉腿部有些别扭，另外线条其实可以再自信一点。多加练习，一定会有更加长远的进步！
Robertncook
Thank you for pointing out the way that the balance is carried in the shoulders: I had consciously struggled with that element, which is part of why the arms have more detail than the legs. I can also see from my strokes that I placed the emphasis on the overlap of the muscles of the arms, but focused more on the volume (space / dimension) of the legs, which explains some of that incongruity. I will keep this in mind as I continue to practice, and I greatly appreciate your advice.