Defensive pose
© 2024 RobertncookDone as the 10-minute final in a 30 minute class.
My current goal is: Reduce stiffness and make my drawings feel more dynamic, energetic, fluid.
First time posting. Please be gentle.
KLFJ
你好，首先我觉得你的表现真是太棒了，尤其是上半身人物形体的扭曲动态可以被清楚地感受到。尤其是肩膀，人物为了完成动作必然要对身体的平衡（重心）进行调整，而肩膀的扭转就是这一目的。当然，下半身的处理上还需要多加练习，没有很好的匹配上肢的扭曲，所以感觉腿部有些别扭，另外线条其实可以再自信一点。多加练习，一定会有更加长远的进步！
Robertncook
Thank you for pointing out the way that the balance is carried in the shoulders: I had consciously struggled with that element, which is part of why the arms have more detail than the legs. I can also see from my strokes that I placed the emphasis on the overlap of the muscles of the arms, but focused more on the volume (space / dimension) of the legs, which explains some of that incongruity. I will keep this in mind as I continue to practice, and I greatly appreciate your advice.
Hello and good evening, Robertncook. Nicest work on fluidity and rhythm in your figure drawing. Please keep on working hardest. Thank you and good night.