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by SINE, March 25th 2020 © 2020 SINE

Done as part of a 6 hour class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Jemmy17

Greetings!

I'm not a expert and I'm still learning my human anatomy and proportions. But hopefully I can help you with this feedback. For me, I think you need to work with proportions and sharp lines to be more clean and neat. And, I think it's a little stiff in term of movement lines. But overall, good sketches and train more for improvement as well. I hope I provided a helpful comment to you. Thank you and practice more!

Stay safe!

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Ramosmig

Instead of using many tiny marks to approximate form, try using only one line. It's hard to tell whats going on in your torsos because there's so much chaos.

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