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First ever comic strip
© 2020 Amilevittmy goal is to become a comic book artist so here is my first ever comic strip!
Diana M.
This style is cute! I think the anatomy on the girl could use a bit of work, specifically the bottom half of her body, as well as her arms. I don't think you should tilt the speech bubbles either, most comics keep them straight.
Still, I think you're headed the right direction!
Excellent work on your comic book-type illustration, amilevitt, that's very great sense of promise, indeed.
If I could give you a sense of recommendation, it would be to, please do 5 more minutes of 30 second poses, in ruff sketches? And you know why??? Because, your comic poses will become remotely cartoony, but expressive. Hope it's been completely and totally pragmatic.