20210129_5min

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Dududududududu January 30, 2021 11:19am

omg, i love your style ,keeping it !

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Akikoma January 30, 2021 4:57pm

thank you!

Diana M. January 31, 2021 12:58pm

These look pretty good! Although, for a 30-minute class, I think you should be able to add more detail to your drawings. Instead of being so simplified, do your best to capture the curves of the body more realistically, and maybe shade in some values. Keep up to great work!

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Akikoma January 31, 2021 7:57pm

Hello Diana M.
Thank you for critique!

I'll try it!

Kim - Administrateur du site February 2, 2021 5:19pm

Great work! It can be hard to capture the whole body in 5 minutes or less, but it looks like you really hustled to get there.

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Akikoma February 3, 2021 7:42pm

Thank you!