by Akikoma, January 29th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.


omg, i love your style ,keeping it !


thank you!

Diana M.

These look pretty good! Although, for a 30-minute class, I think you should be able to add more detail to your drawings. Instead of being so simplified, do your best to capture the curves of the body more realistically, and maybe shade in some values. Keep up to great work!


Hello Diana M.
Thank you for critique!

I'll try it!

Kim - Site admin

Great work! It can be hard to capture the whole body in 5 minutes or less, but it looks like you really hustled to get there.


Thank you!

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