Hi

I like that it looks sketchy but I can still recognize every part of it, maybe you can start clearing your lines to make it more consistent (:

Really good job.Disciplined, following the tips and at the same time relaxed. You have just convinced me to get back to the basic tips to draw the figure,

Hello and good morning, Cartoonistahn. Way to go on your 2 minute quick pose. Way to go and keep that up.

I think that your memory pose could use a teensy-weensy bit of more life and vitality. Would you kindly be able to do 5 minutes of 1 minute memory poses. So that you memory will become more and more raw-er and more and more precise. For even more info, be sure to look into Vol. 1 of Walt Stanchfield series.

Good luck to you and your studes of art and drawing.

안녕하세요, 좋은 아침입니다, Cartoonistahn. 2분 퀵 포즈를 취하는 방법입니다. 방법을 가고 그것을 유지합니다.

나는 당신의 기억 포즈가 약간의 삶과 활력을 더 많이 사용할 수 있다고 생각합니다. 1분 메모리포즈 5분 해주시면 감사하겠습니다. 그래서 당신의 기억은 점점 더 날카로워지고 더 정확해질 것입니다. 더 자세한 정보는 Vol. 월트 스탠치필드 시리즈 1편. 당신과 당신의 예술과 그림 연구에 행운을 빕니다.

I can't add much to what others have already said, the only advice (which really helped me) is to use two pencils of different colours when sketching (like he does:

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Keep practising and you will improve in no time!

나는 다른 사람들이 이미 말한 것에 많은 것을 추가할 수 없습니다. 유일한 조언(정말 도움이 됨)은 스케치할 때 다른 색상의 두 연필을 사용하는 것입니다(그가 하는 것처럼: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v = hV_QYMN5R1g).

계속 연습하면 곧 향상됩니다!

This is good, I suggest working on the mid body section.

Im a beginner myself so not in a position to give you an academic critique however, i like the gestural feel of your drawing and the further would say - try out really quick 10-30 second gesture sketching - i believe this will give your drawing more dynamic feel

regards