To be fair, I am starting out so I might not be the best to give critique but overall The images are strong, there is a good sense of proportion.
a lot of the images work well.
my critique might be to go back to the basics, I don't see a lot of action lines in sketches, you might be at the stage where you don't need them but I think they might add more movement to your sketches so that they flow better. Especially the dancing sketches it doesn't feel like they are fluid enough.
Great effort, keep at it.
