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June 3, 2018 2:39am #523

mikaere808

I did this with the 30 minute setting I need some input please

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June 3, 2018 3:23am #2499

mikaere808

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here's another one I did the same night

I would like some input on this one as well

thanks in advance

Stan

June 5, 2018 10:17am #2507

Sanne

Hi Stan!

Your 30 minute studies look pretty good there. I'm missing some of the underlying basics that help capture the movement, which makes the second sketch look a bit stiff. I think a slight dramatization of the action line combined with more fluid lines (less short strokes) can give you a stronger basis to work from.

What goals are you currently working towards with your art?

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June 18, 2018 2:22am #2546

mikaere808

I just want to increase the accuracy of my life drawing skills. I'm a photographer by trade. I use drawing as a means to help me find the shadow shapes in things and make compositions of them. I figure if I can make an interesting composition in a drawing I should be able to do the same with a photography.

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