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  • #523

    I did this with the 30 minute setting I need some input please

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    #2499

    here's another one I did the same night

    I would like some input on this one as well

    thanks in advance

    Stan

    #2507

    Hi Stan!

    Your 30 minute studies look pretty good there. I'm missing some of the underlying basics that help capture the movement, which makes the second sketch look a bit stiff. I think a slight dramatization of the action line combined with more fluid lines (less short strokes) can give you a stronger basis to work from.

    What goals are you currently working towards with your art?

    #2546

    I just want to increase the accuracy of my life drawing skills. I'm a photographer by trade. I use drawing as a means to help me find the shadow shapes in things and make compositions of them. I figure if I can make an interesting composition in a drawing I should be able to do the same with a photography.

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