The Stink Test II
© 2026 Jcmlfineart
Crayon on Paper.
It is pretty hard to get the colours to look like they do in the drawing in real life. But this is a homework assignment final drawing I thought I'd share.
My biggest weakness was the face in this image. I was unsure how to make a subtle sniff face, and the model was using more of a preening, pretty and sleepy expression. So I went for a more neutral face.
I know that it could still use work. But it's good enough before I start hitting the paint stage.
Thanks in advance for all your critiques and advice on how to improve this image.
Apocalyptic Chaos
The anatomy on this is awesome and the reflection in the back is pretty neat, maybe if you flared the nostrils and wrinkled the nose slightly you would get more of a sniff impresson.
Dwarrenart
I love the colors you used...my eyes dance around the page and I keep noticing more details. The reflection in the mirror and that vanity...*chef's kiss*. Beautiful.
One thing I notice is the hair in relation to her face needs a little more movement or adjustment. I can't put my finger on it, but it's a little off to me.
I actually really like her expression. It's super peaceful to me, more like stretching and being at home in her body then a sniff test. xD But if you wanted the more sniff effect, maybe a slight wrinkle in her nose and a light downturn to her mouth.
Overall I love the piece.. your use of color, the detail and anatomy is very well done!
One thing I notice is the hair in relation to her face needs a little more movement or adjustment. I can't put my finger on it, but it's a little off to me.
I actually really like her expression. It's super peaceful to me, more like stretching and being at home in her body then a sniff test. xD But if you wanted the more sniff effect, maybe a slight wrinkle in her nose and a light downturn to her mouth.
Overall I love the piece.. your use of color, the detail and anatomy is very well done!
