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A very good piece of work, but you could add more subjective visual design on top of this. For example, the shadow on the neck could be darkened more to highlight the face, and the structure of the arms could be weakened, but you can't completely leave the elliptical shape vague (maybe that's how it appears in the photo, but in the painting it becomes a new form of expression, and for an audience who knows nothing, a new believable visual language is needed to convince them).这是一个非常好的作品，但你可以在此基础上添加更多主观的视觉设计。例如，脖子上的阴影可以更暗一些，以突出脸部，手臂的结构可以弱化，但你不能完全让椭圆形状模糊（也许这是它在照片中出现的方式，但在绘画中它成为一种新的表达形式，对于一无所知的观众来说，需要一种新的可信的视觉语言来说服他们）。