I understand that you don't want critique on this, but this is easily fixable by using loomis method or the 1/2,1/4,1/8 rule. When setting up the head, remember that generally, the brow line is halfway down the face, the tip of the nose a quarter more down the face, and the mouth a further eigth down the face. Perspective obviously changes this, but that's where the loomis method would work (It's basically the same concept, but you have start from a ball that you drop the chin on)
I understand that you don't want critique on this, but this is easily fixable by using loomis method or the 1/2,1/4,1/8 rule. When setting up the head, remember that generally, the brow line is halfway down the face, the tip of the nose a quarter more down the face, and the mouth a further eigth down the face. Perspective obviously changes this, but that's where the loomis method would work (It's basically the same concept, but you have start from a ball that you drop the chin on)