what i am doing wrong?

by SINE, April 6th 2019 © 2019 SINE

Done as part of a 3 hour class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Goose Catto

If you turn the picture you can see that all the facial features are too close together and very high on the face. You could try practicing faces in profile and get the proportions worked out, maybe?

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