I think overall this is alright considering the 2 minutes you had to draw this. however I do see some things you could improve upon in this, firstly the torso is a tad short, which in turn makes the hips higher than they should be and the legs higher as well. A tip to help this issue is to remember that a torso is typically 3 heads tall, here you only have it 2 heads tall. Another problem I see is that the head is a bit small, the fix for this is simple, just that the head should be a bit bigger than the neck. Next time maybe you could devote a little more time to the arms cause they look a bit neglected compared to everything else. Other than that, I think you've done fairly well! I hope that my comment helps :)
Vampyrecherub (unregistered visitor)
I think overall this is alright considering the 2 minutes you had to draw this. however I do see some things you could improve upon in this, firstly the torso is a tad short, which in turn makes the hips higher than they should be and the legs higher as well. A tip to help this issue is to remember that a torso is typically 3 heads tall, here you only have it 2 heads tall. Another problem I see is that the head is a bit small, the fix for this is simple, just that the head should be a bit bigger than the neck. Next time maybe you could devote a little more time to the arms cause they look a bit neglected compared to everything else. Other than that, I think you've done fairly well! I hope that my comment helps :)