Great work!!! Proportions are solid. Gestures are still a little bit stiff, which make your longer figure drawings just a tad bit stiff also. I think you could work on your [line quality/line weight] for the thicks and thins of the line. And maybe increase your range of tone value for the longer poses to really flesh out the volumes. Separate the values between your shadows (i.e. cast shadows, core shadows, reflected light, and mid tone and highlights). Have Fun!!!!!
Great work!!! Proportions are solid. Gestures are still a little bit stiff, which make your longer figure drawings just a tad bit stiff also. I think you could work on your [line quality/line weight] for the thicks and thins of the line. And maybe increase your range of tone value for the longer poses to really flesh out the volumes. Separate the values between your shadows (i.e. cast shadows, core shadows, reflected light, and mid tone and highlights). Have Fun!!!!!
Ron :D