Would love Feedback!

by Jimm, June 11th 2020 © 2020 Jimm

Tenth session of serious practice. 30-minute session, 10-minute sketches.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form.

I haven't been doing this for very long, so I would love any feedback!

Ginger Snappish

You have a lovely soft flow to your drawings! Everything feels very calm and alive and human, which is very important, to have that lifelike quality! I think your overall proportion is not bad, however some places like the thighs look a little thin compared to other places like the front of the shin. Learning about underlying skeletal structure and muscle groups may help you think about how the body is constructed? I hope you don't mind, but I screencapped your drawing and made a little demo on top of it to try and show kind of what I mean about bones and muscles areas. https://www.dropbox.com/s/rkbx3uodk22rbn6/bonesvsmuscles.jpg?dl=0

I hope this helps a little! Please keep up the good work-your stuff really does already look very lifelike!

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Jimm

Whoah! Thank you so much for your critique!

I definitely didn't mind you screenshotting my drawing, and I super appreciate the demo and the feedback!

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