White Patio

by Polyvios Animations, June 16th 2020 © 2020 Polyvios Animations

Done as part of a 1 hour class.

My current goal is: Draw my one-point perspective, in my backgrounds, scenes, and environments, with most and most instinct, and most and most feeling.

Here's my newest scene and background of the palm tree-laced room in this post. What do you think? What can I do to make it most refined, or am I all set??

Big Chee

Hey hey hey! Scenes are vital in art, so make sure to take your time with them. In this piece, it feels as though it was rushed. To me the colors feel thrown together and it is nearly impossible to recognize any shapes that would appear in the reference photo, almost as if at the last second you got frustrated and decided to scribble all over it? I'm not sure, but next time when doing backgrounds, if you do not have a lot of time, start by mapping out the placement of the objects and features in the scene so that there is clarity and cohesivity in your drawings, and fill in essential details that makes a scene recognizable.

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Polyvios Animations

Thanks, Big Chee, but I'm working on my analysis and intuition on my background studies for my drawn animation exercises. I'm, not just trying to, but doing the best I can.

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Adupp 8

Can u explain the drawing

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Polyvios Animations

This drawing is just for practice, and thanks for your critique.

Polyvios Animations.

P.S. It's meant to be a real patio/foyer, in terms of colors, temperatures, hues, and others.

Art Wolf 24

?? What even is this ??

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Polyvios Animations

This is totally supposed to be a white patio with green trees.

Art Wolf 24

Its extremely hard to make out anything, and I didn't even know what this was, no offense or anything, but if it wasn't for the title I would be clueless on what this is. I hope I wasn't too mean, have a great day and keep on practicing!

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Polyvios Animations

I'm making greater progress, here.

Lemoreirax

I enjoy doing expressive lines like this. but maybe, next time, try doing it with grafitti pencil only, see what u can get just with the texture and monocromatic/gray scale overview

express our emotions by drawing is really a gift.

i have one doubt, these lines and colors are about your inner world or the outter world?

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Polyvios Animations

Just a little bit of both the inner and outer worlds, Lemoreirax.

And, where do I get a graffiti pencil? Traditionally or digitally??

Polyvios Animations.

P.S. Greater job on your comment.

Wamafi

Maybe try looking at the thing you're drawing?

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Polyvios Animations

Can do, Wamafi, if in a blind contour drawing.

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