10 min 10262020
© 2020 SailrgoonDone as part of a 1 hour class.
My current goal is: Reduce stiffness and make my drawings feel more dynamic, energetic, fluid
Polyvios Animations
That's a great start you've got here, sailrgoon. Keep up the good work on your human gestural bodies!
But, I've got one small idea for improvement: I've been feeling a little bit of, and I've thought there's some stiffness in the body or two. Why don't you please push the movement and lines of action even more, in 20 minutes of 30 second poses? Oh, and another thing, please check out this link??
Why. Because, they could be extremely and essentially useful in your current goal.
Hope it's been extremely and intensely vital and crucial.
I love the perspective, its great here. But u should focus on legs proportions more. The first girl u drew is too small. Yes, i know she was supposed to be chubby, but instead of drawing her. chubby, u made her look like she doesnt have few bones. After all I love their movement
Thank you Asgyva!
Yes I absolutely agree. I think I was more worried about even getting the body down on paper and getting nervous about the timer that I didn't even really bother to consider the density of muscle, fat and bone beneath the surface. Admittedly focusing on all the contours instead of the gesture itself. Appreciate you taking the time to comment :)
Cheers!