有點迷惑

by Hosituki Aya, July 31st 2021 © 2021 Hosituki Aya

總編輯說我的人物造型不穩定……應該指的是服裝造型等等,我該怎麼練習才好呢?
長時間的人物素描可能會是個好主意,畢竟我很少化這種練習。

Aunt Herbert

I applaud your disciplined focus on construction. I am not entirely sure about your use of the center line in the depiction of the head. Sometimes the head is clearly pointing to the side, while you still draw a center line in the middle?

A more helpful remark might be, that you can improve the upper torso by separating the ribcage from the shoulders (bones, joints, muscles) The ribcage is more egg-shaped, not much wider than the head at the neck. The square-like appearance of the upper torso comes more from integrating the clavicles and shoulders, but as they move separately from the ribcage you can easily improve your construction by separating them and the chest- and/or back muscles and shoulder joints into separate entities in your mind.

2
Hosituki Aya

關於中心線,我最近對對面的畫法是這樣的

我摸索對我的漫畫最有效的結構。

我會嘗試你說的方法,將胸腔和肩部分開來改善結構,感謝你!

More from Hosituki Aya

View sketchbook