Trying to keep dynamic energy in the refinment stage.
The fluidity looks great! Remember that when making a drawing dynamic, to not lose proportion. The palm, for exmaple, looks unnaturally swelled. Also, to improve the lines, try minimizing the amount of feathery lines you do while sketching.
Thank you! I do see the palm now that you pointed it now.
the wrist muscles are a bit huge, they are usually flat in humans . this wont be the case if its a stylized character. anyways great art.
Thanks for the critique. That's good to know!