I'm still working on this. Drew this from a magazine cover.
If you want more realism to the face, try to catch the shape of the object. Don't think for example an eye as an eye. Think it as a shape. If you know in advance how to draw an eye and then just draw it, it easily becomes a symbol of an eye.
Thank u. Appreciate the feedback
Great work in progress!
Perhaps try making his face and chin shorter, I'm sure this would greatly improve this piece overall