too minimalistic?

by Janhackstrom, November 8th 2021 © 2021 Janhackstrom
Polyvios Animations

Nothing too minimalistic, Jan. Other than that, you're doing a very good job on that facial expression.

My tiny criticism is that though the shapes and spaces are being held together well, no offense, but the lines are really too choppier and hairier. Would you please be more loose and confident with your bold strokes with your dominant shoulder instead of just your wrist? The reason is because, your perception of edges will become the most clearer and quickest and smooth, as they'll get better with time and practice.

Hope this helped and have a great night/morning.


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