The pose in the top-right hand corner is my favorite! The combination of straight and curved lines really helps communicate the movement.
Hello there, pandahal.
Awesome work on your loose lines and lines of action, plus lines of rhythm. Way to go. I would love to see you keep them up. My bigger critique is that though your animation is totally getting there, yet, I'm not seeing you lose enough of your blandness and stiff quality in your first-ever post. Would you please lighten and loosen up your lines and edges more with 30 minutes of 29 second quick poses, using our custom timer or session setting?
The reason why you could and should go ahead with this thing is as a result, your forces and motions will become the most cartoony and funny ever, as it can and shall be your first current goal. And if you wanna see more, be sure to pick up a copy of Vol. 1 of the Walt Stanchfield Books.
Good luck to you, and I hope you'll find this educational and informative.