Hello, and good evening, BAWXF.
I'm saying that you're first try is definitely on the right track in terms of your figure drawing. Great job on your quick poses and slow and careful poses.
Where is your 15 minute drawing tutorial drawings? Would you please go with that thing?? The reason why is that, so it's the little rite of initiation into the website. First it goes quicker with the 5-30 second poses, followed by the longer 5 minute doodle.
Good luck with you and your future potential, and I hope this has been completely and absolutely helpful and supportive.