I decided to try line of action so i might improve and reach my long wished goal.*

by Wannabe, March 7th 2022 © 2022 Wannabe

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

Don't mind the figuers i just wanted to save some papers.

I would really aprreciate guidance..even in critisim way.

My current goal is: Reduce stiffness and make my drawings feel more dynamic, energetic, fluid

Polyvios Animations

Good evening, Wannabe, it's me again, how are you? Greater job on your hand forces over your forms. And furthermore, greater job on your hand spaces. I especially love that pointing hand attitude. Represents force and authority.

I feel that your point would be more that direct, powerful, and bolder if you'd just go ahead and lighten up your forces with a 5 minute sketch of that gesture. As a real result, your hands and feet could and should be able to follow through with your goal. Hope these help you so much.

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